Great
This is great work. I loved the dark "feel" to it. As if it was not surely stable and could crumble anytime anywhere... Anyways.. I couldn't help but notice a few things which I think could be better...
In the next episode I would love to see a boost on the actual storyline.. right now it is a bit unclear to me of who is the main character and who is the villain..
You need to work on your characters faces.. The eyes of your main character looked odd at some points and the chin of the character at some places, filled the entire face leaving a little space for the mouth, eyes and nose to run over..
Also, a little tip on how to actually make it looks better at times, and not look like it was drawn once and then not redrawn again, is to zoom in on the drawing and then redraw the lines till they fit.. this might be a bit time consuming but it definitely helps!
All in all.. 9/10 A great deal of work, although it does have a few minor flaws, therefore I give it a big 9 ..
Keep up the good work :)